Unit 7 · Lesson 5 of 6 — IB MYP: Personal and Cultural Expression · Communication
Plan, Compose, Revise
Before writing the final mini-composition, decide what should stay consistent and what should change between sections.
In this lesson
Learning Targets
Each section below is labeled with the target it teaches. The questions and your Noteflight task practice every target.
Target 1Plan a short musical form
Target 2Carry motives across sections
Target 3Revise for clarity and expression
IB MYP connection
Command terms: PLAN · DEVELOP
PlanDevelop
Learner Profile · ATL
Reflective · Thinker — Thinking: make and justify expressive choices that shape a complete musical statement.
Task
Use what you're learning to notice this in the music you already know, and be ready to apply it in your next Noteflight task.
Inquiry: What did you decide should stay the same, and what should change, between the sections of your piece?
Reflect: What did “Plan, Compose, Revise” teach you about your own composing choices?
Key words
Words you will use today
Section map
A plan of a piece’s form before composing: each section, its measures, what stays consistent, and what changes.
Consistent element
Something that stays the same across sections (often the motive, key, or tempo). Consistent elements create unity.
Changing element
Something you deliberately alter in a new section (register, rhythm, texture, dynamics). Changing elements create contrast.
Return
The moment an earlier section comes back, as when A returns in ABA form (Unit 4, Unit 7 Lesson 1).
Clarity
How easily a listener can follow the music: hear where sections begin, recognize the motive, and sense the form.
Planning the form
Target 1
Map the form before you write the notes
In Lesson 1 you learned to recognize A and B sections. For a full composition, decide the form first and write it down as a section map: for each section, the measures it covers, what stays consistent, and what changes. Planning this way keeps a longer piece from wandering.
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A section map in real music
The “Twinkle” melody (the theme of Mozart’s Variations, K. 265) is a complete ABA form in twelve measures. A (mm. 1–4) opens and closes on the home tone. B (mm. 5–8) stays higher and ends open, on D. A returns (mm. 9–12) and closes the piece.
Traditional / Mozart, K. 265 theme, in C: A (mm. 1–4), B (mm. 5–8), A (mm. 9–12).02
Deciding what changes
A strong B section changes at least two elements so the contrast is clearly audible, and keeps at least one so it still belongs to the same piece. Good candidates to change: register, rhythm, accompaniment pattern, dynamics. Good candidates to keep: key, tempo, the motive.
Motives across sections
Target 2
Carry the motive into every section
Contrast does not mean starting over. In a well-built piece, the B section usually grows out of material from A, transformed with the techniques from Unit 4: sequence, rhythmic variation, contour variation, or a changed ending. The listener hears something new that is still clearly related.
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Twinkle’s B section is built from A
Look at the orange notes. The second half of A (F F E E D D C) is moved up a step to become B (G G F F E E D). B is a sequence of A’s descending segment, which is why the contrast feels connected.
mm. 3–4 (end of A) and mm. 5–6 (start of B), highlighted. Shown with mm. 1–2 and 7–8 for context.02
Contrast that keeps a family resemblance
The third phrase of “Ode to Joy” is its contrasting phrase: it introduces a new eighth-note figure and skips, where the first two phrases moved mostly by step in quarter notes. It still keeps the quarter-note pulse and the narrow range, so it sounds like the same piece.
Beethoven, “Ode to Joy,” phrase 3 (in C): new rhythm, same pulse and range.
Revising for clarity and expression
Target 3
Can a listener follow it? Does it say what you intend?
Revise with two questions. Clarity: can a listener hear where each section begins and recognize the motive when it returns? Expression: do the dynamics, articulation, and register support the character of each section? Below, a B-section opening is revised for clarity.
BeforeDraft: new pitches and a new rhythm with no link to the motive.
AfterRevision: the motive’s shape (repeat, leap up a 4th, step down) in longer values.
Revision note: On playback, the draft B section sounded like a different piece. Nothing in it connected to the motive, so the form was hard to follow. I rebuilt its opening from the motive: the same repeated note and leap up a 4th, in half and quarter notes instead of eighths. Now B sounds new but related.
The note identifies a clarity problem heard on playback, the specific fix, and how the fix connects to the motive.
Worked plan
Target 1Target 2Target 3
Planning “Long Way Home”
This is the section map for the course model you will study in Composition 7. Here is its A section: the Unit 4 course motive, a sequence, and I–IV–V accompaniment from Units 5–6.
“Long Way Home” (course model), A section, mm. 1–8: flute over cello.
Section
Measures
Motive
Stays consistent
Changes
A
1–8
Stated, then sequenced up a step
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Establishes key, tempo, flowing broken chords, mf
B
9–16
Rhythmic variation (longer values), sequenced
Key, tempo, motive’s shape
Higher register, repeated staccato chords, p growing to f, open ending
A′
17–24
Returns unchanged
mm. 1–6 exactly
New ending: climbs to high C and fades to p
Model description: “Long Way Home” uses ABA form. The A section states the course motive and sequences it up a step, over flowing broken chords at mf. The B section keeps the key, tempo, and the motive’s shape, but changes the rhythm to longer values, moves the melody higher, switches the accompaniment to repeated staccato chords, and grows from p to f. When A returns, its first six measures are unchanged so the listener recognizes home, and a new ending climbs to high C and fades.
The description names the form, what stays consistent, what changes in each section, and how the motive travels through all of them.
Check your understanding
Try it before you compose
Pick an answer for each question. You will see right away whether you are correct and why.
0 of 6 correct
1Listen only. What is the form of this melody?
Target 1
2Which B-section plan creates the clearest contrast while keeping the piece unified?
Target 1
3How does Twinkle’s B section carry material from A?
Target 2
4Play both B-section openings. Which one carries the motive (G G C B A G) into the new section?
Target 2Target 3
A
B
5On playback, you can’t tell where your B section starts. Which revision fixes that most directly?
Target 3
6In the “Long Way Home” plan, why do the first six measures of A′ return unchanged?
Target 1Target 2
Take it to Noteflight
Plan your final mini-composition
This lesson is the planning stage for Composition 7. Make your section map, compose the opening of your piece, and revise one spot for clarity or expression.
Your Noteflight task
Write a section map for an AB or ABA piece of about 16–24 measures: for each section list the measures, how your motive appears, what stays consistent, and at least two elements that change. Compose your A section and the first four measures of B, then listen and revise one spot for clarity or expression, with a revision note.